Monday, November 25, 2013

Grateful poem

                                               Gratitude poem 

           I'm grateful for my life 
and the way I shall live it 
      
          I'm grateful for my school
Though i might be a tool 

     I'm grateful for the food 
I eat I consider it a treat

I'm grateful for my family 
Who's always there for me 

I'm grateful for my mom
She always keeps me calm

I'm grateful for my dad 
Who is totally rad 

I'm grateful for my dog 
Who looks like a log

I'm grateful for 
Clothes which keeps me warm 

I'm grateful for my shelter
Which protects me from pelter

I'm grateful for my teachers 
Because they are our leaders 

I'm grateful for my friends
Cause there with me till the ends 

I'm greatful for kylee 
Because she's smiley 

I'm greatful for Helen 
Cause she ain't yellin 

I'm grateful for Cory 
Cause he's s saury

I'm grateful for Riley 
Cause he's a highly contagious 




Thursday, November 21, 2013

30 second video

Today we had to do a 30 second video about a book "in our mothers house"

Monday, November 18, 2013

My performance piece

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=epBaQxA6o7M&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DepBaQxA6o7M

Thursday, November 14, 2013

Post writing criterion

The time I came to BCS 

 
       As I stepped in the doorway the air smelled sweet I took a few steps and before I know it kids were pouring in form every direction! I didn't know that many people I knew five people Helen Devine, Emme sparks, Fiona Moore, Sam goodman and Zachary brown. I knew a 2 other kids from a garage sale over the summer Riley cook, Clayton fox.  As I walk to my locker bay I see a perky little blonde next to me! She introduces herself as "Kylee Haddad" she takes me to my class room after we put our stuff away. My mom gives me a hug and kiss and says to "have a great day"! 

       We walk in a room with a teacher in a fancy shirt and pants were a pin that says "sun planter" as I sit down in a seat next to Kylee she introduces me to spunky girl walking towards Kylee she says "Hi, my names I'Yana". So far I'm getting to meet a lot of people then she introduces me to the last person he walks up and starts talking he says " why are you wearing a black dress?" I start thinking to myself well that's great he doesn't even tell me his name and he's already criticizing me! I ignore him stating " whats your name" he replays saying " Cory,Cory Gluckman
I say " Lydia Hamilton".


       And last but not least their was one kid in particular I wanted to meet i didn't know his name he was a blonde and had a jacket on he got up out of he's seat and ran around the room pretending to be an airplane making noises going nuts. I didn't know what to do but there was definitely something weird going on! The kids make was Riley cook!  Now this was gonna be a crazy year! 

    

Monday, November 11, 2013

Thursday, November 7, 2013

Revised grammar

As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated
“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”
“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”
We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”
“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weappon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.


            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.


 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.




 Emme said



“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”
I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!
Why not? She asked
“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

We sat back down to enjoy the neck chilling movie. When it was over we got up went downstairs and did homework when we finished Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

Monday, November 4, 2013

revised a bit

Thursday the 17th
“I’m nervous” I said “scardy cat” As we walked in my bedroom and turned on the TV, the white on the walls seemed to bright as bright as snow, snow sparkling in the sun! the wood on my floor new and polished, I have never paid this much attention or detail to my room. I guess that’s what happens when you’re scared. I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated
“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”
“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”
“It’s not my fault” she yelled
The older woman forced the weapon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.


            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work.


 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.




 Emme said
“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”
I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!
Why not? She asked
“Because I’m never going camping again”
*she laughed*
“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.
 When it was over we got up went downstairs ,Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight!






sorry

last couple days my blog wasnt working so sorry about no posts