finished and done with all revision and editing

                                 Thursday the 17^th

As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weappon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

We sat back down to enjoy the neck chilling movie. When it was over we got up went downstairs and did homework when we finished Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

10/30/13 post

sorry i forgot to post yesterday, yesterday i only did revision on deleting words

helping again

I helped Helen revised and deleted words on new story

helping

Helped Kylee Revise Her Story :)

thursday the 17th

                                 Thursday the 17^th

“I’m nervous” I said “scardy cat” As we walked in my bedroom and turned on the TV, the white on the walls seemed to bright as bright as snow, snow sparkling in the sun! the wood on my floor new and polished, I have never paid this much attention or detail to my room. I guess that’s what happens when you’re scared. I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weapon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

 When it was over we got up went downstairs ,Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

thursday the 17th

                                 Thursday the 17^th

“I’m nervous” I said “scardy cat” As we walked in my bedroom and turned on the TV, the white on the walls seemed to bright as bright as snow, snow sparkling in the sun! the wood on my floor new and polished, I have never paid this much attention or detail to my room. I guess that’s what happens when you’re scared. I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weapon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

We sat back down to enjoy the neck chilling movie. When it was over we got up went downstairs and did homework when we finished Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

thursday the 17th

                                 Thursday the 17^th

As we walked in my bedroom and turned on the TV, the white on the walls seemed to bright as snow the wood on my floor new and polished, I have never paid this much attention or detail to my room. I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter and left it in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weapon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

We sat back down to enjoy the neck chilling movie. When it was over we got up went downstairs and did homework when we finished Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

thursday the 17th finished

                                 Thursday the 17^th

As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with a weapon in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a weapon in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching him”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the weappon at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the weapon  at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a room and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement.

We sat back down to enjoy the neck chilling movie. When it was over we got up went downstairs and did homework when we finished Emme’s parents came we gave each other a look and we both knew neither of us are sleeping tonight! 

pawn on friday the 13th "not finished"

                                 Thursday the 17^th

As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with the machete in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a knife in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching, my little baby Jason is gone, all the other councilors are dead you’re the last one”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the knife at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the machete at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.

            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a cellar and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.

 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.

 Emme said

“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”

I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!

Why not? She asked

“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*

“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5^th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement. 

" pawn on Friday the 13th" sill working on

                                  Thursday the 17^th

As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated

“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”

“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”

We both Sat are food on the counter in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with the machete in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a knife in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching, my little baby Jason is gone, all the other councilors are dead you’re the last one”

“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the knife at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the machete at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away. 

what I heard from joey was that to be something big and important you have to start out small and work up to being important and earn the right to be there starting from the bottom now up to a better place buy working hard even though it might not important now know it will be important later.

                     

 Halloween shopping finished

            

    My mom, my dad, Lucas and I Went in the car on our way to Halloween Spirit going to pick out some decorations and hopefully get some costumes when we started to walk in all you could see is fog, fog everywhere. When the fog started to clear up we walked in to a huge clown, a man hanging upside down and fortune teller in a box. To turn on the people you had to step on a button. The first thing Lucas did was run to jump on the button of the clown lying on the floor forced by the button pulled up. The clown popped up like a jack in the box and slowly my brother backed away in fear while I was staring at the upside down man I pressed the button and the guy said:

                                  “Hey, A man could get thirsty around here hanging around, how about a bloody Mary”

                My mom and I started Laughing. Then we walked a little farther to see what else there is

There was a spider on the ground and my brother ran to hug it when it popped up in the air and made a hissing sound. My brother ran to my dad and looked away my mom passed a baby doll with cracks all over her. My Mom thinks hilarious to play tricks on me that have to do with dolls because I was always afraid (ever since I flipped through the channels when I was little and saw Chucky.) So my mom grabbed the doll and called my name as I turned around to respond a doll was staring at me in the eyes I jumped in fear and my mom started laughing and  I started  to respond by saying “ Let’s just go look for costumes” my mom responded by nodding her head.

                We went to the little boys section my brother looked at the firemen, monsters and clowns then he turned to a different section pointed his finger and said “that one” he looked at me and we went to the counter to buy the perfectly fitted Police man for my little brother. As we started to walk out of the store Lucas looked at me and smiled and I just smiled back.

                Right when we walked in the door Lucas would not stop saying…

“Can I try it on?”

“Yes” I would say.

“can I can I can I can I?”

“Yes, go”

                                He put on the police man costume and a belt. He shoved a pair of handcuffs in his belt,  Then the baton, a gun and he took a matchbox police car from the thousands we have in the basement and put it in his pocket. He looked so cute! Everyone started taking pictures of him in his little outfit.

                I just watched as smiled looking ever so professional as I looked at him and laughed.

Halloween Shopping Revision

            

                My mom, my dad, Lucas and I Went in the car on our way to Halloween Spirit going to pick out some decorations and hopefully get some costumes when we started to walk in all you could see is fog, fog everywhere. When the fog started to clear up we walked in to a huge clown, a man hanging upside down and fortune teller in a box. To turn on the people you had to step on a button. The first thing Lucas did was run to jump on the button of the clown lying on the floor forced by the button pulled up. The clown popped up like a jack in the box and slowly my brother backed away in fear while I was staring at the upside down man I pressed the button and the guy said:

                                  “Hey, A man could get thirsty around here hanging around, how about a bloody Mary”

                My mom and I started Laughing. Then we walked a little farther to see what else there is

There was a spider on the ground and my brother ran to hug it when it popped up in the air and made a hissing sound. My brother ran to my dad and looked away, my mom passed a baby doll with cracks all over her. My Mom thinks hilarious to play tricks on me that have to do with dolls because I was always afraid (ever since I flipped through the channels when I was little and stared to watch Chucky not knowing it was Chucky.) So my mom grabbed the doll and called my name as I turned around to respond a doll was staring at me in the eyes I jumped in fear and my mom started laughing ( ill get her back good I thought)and  I started  to respond by saying “ Let’s just go look for costumes” my mom responded by nodding her head.

                We went to the little boys section my brother looked at the firemen, monsters and clowns then he turned to a different section pointed his finger and said “that one” he looked at me and we went to the counter to buy the perfectly fitted Police man for my little brother. As we started to walk out of the store Lucas looked at me and smiled and I just smiled back.

My Great Aunt Layla's

As we walked in the car my aunt Cynthia asked me how school was going and we talked a little bit about everything. My little brother started screaming about how much he wanted to go to my great aunt Layla’s. We tried to calm him down but as soon as traffic moved up he stopped crying. This was much more soothing!

As we drove down the road we saw a whole bunch of books lying on the side of the road.

Dr. Seuss, Ronald Dahl, J.K Rowling! All laying in abundant amounts on the road!  If I estimated how many books were on the road I would say 80. I felt bad as me and my aunt pondered the thought of why those books were on the road? Or was there an accident?

                As we got to the house there was a bug on the windshield, I looked at it from my seat

The soft pair of wings dotted in orange coved by black. Followed by The sweet smell of nature that came with it, As  the bug started crawling away hoping to get out. As we got out of the car, left the door open for the bug. Which slowly flied toward the light away in the air.And that was the trip to my great aunt Layla’s.

                                                                                                  -Lydia Hamilton  

Daytona Beach summer

                                           Daytona Beach

                              (Word Count Goal- 300)

It was a beautiful day in Florida, 90 degree weather and hot sand on your toes.  Beach and tides coming in at every direction. My mom putting sunscreen on my brother and my dad getting our stuff out of the car while I went to one of the canopies and bought 3 boggy boards, chairs and a umbrella I was so excited I hopped into the water and got my hair all wet. It felt so good I was so happy we came. I ran up on the beach. My dad and I got a boggy board and went out pretty far I was kind a nervous because of sharks and jellyfish.  My brother ran up to the tip wear the water hit the sand. He slowly touched the water and my mom took his hand and ran into to the water together.

                My dad and I went far out saw a huge tided I said “Let’s go for this one” he nodded in

 Agreement we turned around waiting to hear the rustling of the tide hit the soft board to push us away

When we got to the sand I asked him if I could go out alone and super far he said “see how far you can go and try to get a big wave” I smiled

                I went out far to the point I couldn’t touch the bottom I saw a wave so tall it made me shake Inside “I’m going for it I can do it” I thought to myself I slowly turned my board at an angle, I knew this would be the biggest tide I would hit all day I sat and waited patiently I could hear it coming I got the chills and I shut my eyes………

                Next thing I knew I was on top of the wave going extremely fast heading to the shining sand the wave took me all the way to the sand I was shocked I got off the boggy board held it in one hand and ran to my mom and dad asking “Mom, Dad did you see that the wave took me all the way to the sand!” I said. My mom replied saying “ I stood up looking for you I couldn’t see you, you were all the way to the left and super far, I thought you were nervous to go out that far because of sharks”

“Not anymore” I said

                                                                                                       -Lydia Hamilton 

Movie Theater

                                 Movie Theater

A couple nights ago my dad my brother and I went to great lakes crossing we were hungry and my brother asked “Can we eat” my dad replied by nodding his head. Lucas said  I want to eat at the alligator” AKA rainforest café my dad looked at me to see if I really I wanted to, I smiled my dad asked us while we were walking if we wanted to go to the star movie theater after we eat Lucas yelled “ YES” I jumped in joy we walked to the cashier and looked at the movie panel we decided on

 “Cloudy With A Chance of Meatballs”, 7:45

My dad said we had an hour to eat so we bought the tickets and walked to the restaurant to eat “I’m so excited” I said  my brother grabbed my hand as we walked into eat my brother got chicken strips my dad got a cheeseburger and I got pasta. When we were done eating we walked back to the theater everyone was so full so we only got a little bit of food we got Sour patch watermelons 2 slushy’s and Twizzler pack. The lady at the desk gave us two bracelets one with a strawberry and on with a monkey named Steve. I was walking in the theater when suddenly my dad noticed the sight said

“Cloudy With a Chance of Meatballs 2”, 6:45

We walked back to the cashier and explained to them what happened she said to go to customer service so we explained the story to them again they gave us the new theater room for 7:45 and we finally got to sit down and relax. I was happy to finally be able to relax. While we watched the movie full of laughs. My dad slowly got sleepier and sleepier I woke him up at the end. We walked out and smiled as I got sleepier and sleepier. Next thing I knew I was in my bed falling asleep quietly, and softly, softly asleep. 

                                                             Halloween Shopping          

                My mom, my dad, Lucas and I Went in the car on our way to Halloween Spirit going to pick out some decorations and hopefully get some costumes when we started to walk in all you could see is fog, fog everywhere. When the fog started to clear up we walked in to a huge clown, a man hanging upside down and fortune teller in a box. To turn on the people you had to step on a button. The first thing Lucas did was run to jump on the button of the clown lying on the floor forced by the button pulled up. The clown popped up like a jack in the box and slowly my brother backed away in fear while I was staring at the upside down man I pressed the button and the guy said:

                                  “Hey, A man could get thirsty around here hanging around, how about a bloody Mary”

                My mom and I started Laughing. Then we walked a little farther to see what else there is

There was a spider on the ground and my brother ran to hug it when it popped up in the air and made a hissing sound. My brother ran to my dad and looked away my mom passed a baby doll with cracks all over her. My Mom thinks hilarious to play tricks on me that have to do with dolls because I was always afraid (ever since I flipped through the channels when I was little and saw Chucky.) So my mom grabbed the doll and called my name as I turned around to respond a doll was staring at me in the eyes I jumped in fear and my mom started laughing and  I started  to respond by saying “ Let’s just go look for costumes” my mom responded by nodding her head.

                We went to the little boys section my brother looked at the firemen, monsters and clowns then he turned to a different section pointed his finger and said “that one”.