Monday, October 21, 2013

pawn on friday the 13th "not finished"

                                 Thursday the 17th
As we walked in my room I doubted the thought multiple times but she was the guest and that’s what she wanted I couldn’t say no, even thought I tried my mom said I’ve seen worse but still this might be the worst yet. Emme Sparks took the orange Popsicle and I took the red one. We walked back in the room and I pressed the button.

                                                  “Thank you, for your rental!”

I looked at her as she looked at me I gave her a sneer and she just smiled. You could feel the thickness in the air as I pressed play Emme sat in the bean bag and I sat in my bed under the blanket. It was started now we did it and there was no turning back, as we licked are Popsicle in fear Emme stated
“Ha-ha, you have the red one, the color of blood”
“well your eating gooey buggy Mac-n-cheese”
We both Sat are food on the counter in fear I looked turned off the lights as they gave the cast and crew names. Emme and I both pointed out the people we knew. Then forest, forest everywhere trees bushes and bugs I watched the blonde run away in fear until she reached the lake with the machete in one hand and a necklace in the other the old woman stood in her place with a knife in her hand she yelled

“You watched him die, you should have been watching, my little baby Jason is gone, all the other councilors are dead you’re the last one”
“It’s not my fault” she yelled

The older woman forced the knife at the blonde councilor the blonde ducked ever so swiftly and threw the machete at the old woman as she fell to the ground the blonde ran away.  Now the movie was really starting.


            As these kids walked up to the camp site we all ready new there was only going to be one survivor. As we watched the campers we predicted right one survived and was taken to a cellar and then it said the movie started so Emme and I finally were ready, as the movie was playing my mom was cleaning up and my dad was with my brother. Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, Emme and I heard the door shake we hid under the covers, it was only my dad so we got up and I gave him a hug before he left for work he smelled like cigars.


 He told us “be careful, Jason like to go through windows” at the same time Emme and I popped up and opened the blinds to the four windows in my room then we sat down. As the movie went on Emme said “can I go on the bed with you?” I laughed and said yes. She hopped under the covers with me as we watched the sweat go down the terrified people and the screams coming out of there mouths as we watched them terrified and screaming we thought about what would happen if we were in there shoes.




 Emme said



“I would only go back and save them if It was family, how about you?”
I told her no one because I don’t have to worry about that!
Why not? She asked
“Because I’m never going camping again”

*she laughed*


“Thank god we didn’t watch this in 5th grade camp” I said as we both nodded in agreement. 

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